articulating votorola style democracy

[Michael Allan]

Hi David,

I made a couple minor changes to punctuation and phrasing.
http://u.zelea.com:8080/v/w/D?b=4034&a=4032&aR=4242&bR=4238

If you agree, just hit the patch button.  (You'll have to login first
under your gmail address.)

These are just trivial changes - not a good demo.  But posting diffs
in this manner (ideally more interesting ones) might help to open up
the collaborative process by making it more visible and inviting.
What do you think?

I can provide more info, if you're interested.

-- 
Michael Allan

Toronto, +1 416-699-9528
http://zelea.com/


david mason wrote:
> Hi all,
> 
> Please consider comments and edits on the following, which is an opportunity
> to introduce Votorola type engagement.
> 
> http://visiblegovernment.ca/w/Ethics_Standing_Committee
> 
> David
> 
> -- 
> http://zooid.org/vid